Увольняюсь

[yostrov]

Господа, владеющие деловым английским: нормально написано или как?

I would like to inform you that I am resigning from my position as Technical Architect for the ......

I do not have any ongoing projects which can be completed in two weeks. I would like my resignation to be effective ASAP.  Please let me know how much time you need for this transition.

Thank you for the opportunities for professional and personal development that you have provided me during the last year. I have enjoyed working for the ...... and appreciate the support provided me during my tenure with the company.

Comments

[angerona.livejournal.com]

не очень, но суть понятна, так что сойдет :).

Единственная ошибка, которая сильно портит смысл: должно быть " I do not have any ongoing projects THAT CANNOT be completed in two weeks."

Но вообще слишком формально. Грубо говоря вы хотите написать что-то вроде:

"Dear X

I would like to let you know that I'm resigning, effective [DATE]. As far as I know, I don't have any ongoing projects that would take longer than two weeks to complete and I'm planning on making sure they are completed before I leave.

I have enjoyed working at [COMPANY NAME] and appreciate all the support and collegiate atmosphere I've experienced here. It has been a wonderful experience working here.

Best,
Yostrov"

[mechanismone.livejournal.com]

Плохо, надо в конце дописать - see ya!)

[1master.livejournal.com]

Ну можно еще всякой воды налить про it was a privilege working with you, про great team, про то, что new priorities в жизни, что надеешься, что пути еще раз пересекутся и т.п.

[yelya.livejournal.com]

А почему нельзя написать так:

I would like to inform you that I am resigning from my position as Technical Architect for the ...... I would like my resignation to be effective ASAP.
Thank you for the opportunities for professional and personal development that you have provided me during the last year. I have enjoyed working for the ...... and appreciate the support provided me during my tenure with the company.

Если ты собираешься уходить как можно скорее, то какая разница, есть ли у тебя проекты, которые ты можешь закончить или нет? И если они тебе скажут, что им нужно 4 недели на транзишн, ты же у них не останешься лишние 4 недели? Так зачем же огород городить?

[olgana.livejournal.com]

Удачи в новой работе!

[anna-surova.livejournal.com]

- "I do not have any ongoing projects which can be completed in two weeks" -->
I do not have any ongoing projects to be completed in two weeks

- "... opportunities for professional and personal development that you have provided me ... " --> "... opportunities for professional and personal development you have provided me with ... " или "... opportunities for professional and personal development that you have given to me ... "

- аналогично и "... appreciate the support provided me ..." --> support given to me.

[dennisgorelik]

It does not matter what you write.
Just write it ASAP and then follow up with oral confirmation within an hour.

[lyazzi.livejournal.com]

Начать проект в пятницу и уйти без notice в 2 недели - круто. (Из письма же следует, что оаботы нет, и вы хотите сразу сбежать чтобы 2 недели баклуши не бить). Только работодатель, от которого оффер, тоже не дурак и понимает, что таеое же может быть сделано и с ним, потому запросто уволит без предупреждения, когда надобность закончится. Лучше отсидеть 2 недели и показать что оаботодптелей вы уважаете.

[whocares1970.livejournal.com]

Нaписaнo нoрмaльнo. Удaчи нa нoвoм месте!

[yostrov.livejournal.com]

Hi ...............,


Sorry, but I would like to inform you that I am resigning from my position as Technical Architect for the ........... Technology.
I do not have any ongoing projects which can be completed in weeks and I would like my resignation to be effective ASAP. Please let me know how much time you need for this transition.
Thank you for the opportunities for professional and personal development that you have provided me during the last year. I have enjoyed working for the ............ and appreciate the support provided me during my tenure with the company.

Best regards,

[by-romeo9.livejournal.com]

Новая работа?

[alice-lisina.livejournal.com]

На любой работе, ты должен дать знать что уходишь за 2 недели.


Good luck at new work! :)